help needed with advert

[Wishfull]

hi need advice on a lonlly heart ad im thinking of placeing in my local paper,

male seeking female
male 46 yrs old, seventeen stone,works away from home all week,£50 k in debt,and long standing alcohol problem .seeks a slim well presented lady for long term friendship,
anyone reckon it would get a response

[Angelic]

Re: help needed with advert

Don't mention the 'slim female part' - it's not about what's on the outside ;N 2

GSOH?
OHAC?

[LooLoo]

Re: help needed with advert

I'm all for being honest....... but in the advert do you think you need to mention the debt/alcohol problem??

How about starting out something like

Fuller figured male in his forties is seeking a friendly lady for companionship which could lead to romance. I come with some baggage but think at this point in life don't we all. I am a hard worker and would now like someone to help me enjoy life to the full.

Dunno...???

[Pixie]

Re: help needed with advert

I'm not sure that the OP was really thinking of placing a lonely hearts advert. Sounds to me more like he's just musing on his current situation and feeling quite down about it.

Perhaps he could let us know if he is serious about the ad.

[Never-In-Doubt]

Re: help needed with advert

hi need advice on a lonlly heart ad im thinking of placeing in my local paper,

male seeking female
male 46 yrs old, seventeen stone,works away from home all week,£50 k in debt,and long standing alcohol problem .seeks a slim well presented lady for long term friendship,
anyone reckon it would get a response

You're having a laugh, right? ;LOL ;LOL

I say go for it - the birds would be nuts to miss out on such an opportunity ;-y ;-y

[MustGetStraigh]

Re: help needed with advert

I do think it would be worth amending the ad,

...seeks a slim well presented lady with heaps of money for long term friendship,...
Otherwise sounds excellent!

[jen_br]

Re: help needed with advert

I actually write these ads for a living (well I do it part time)

You need to start off the first line with a catchy line... its almost christmas so use that for your advantage... think of things you like to do.. hobbies etc.

Some ladies and guys use things like "Have you been naughty or nice" "Hello is it me your looking for" "Sleepless in XXX" "I can be your superhero" "Skip this if you don't want fun!"



Single and ready to mingle:
Outgoing SWM with a GSOH late 40's finally looking to start life! Seeking a like minded female who enjoys to keeping active and who is looking for a N/S friendship maybe more?

[Wishfull]

Re: help needed with advert

yes put this on to get a laugh but when i need a new job im gonna put my cv on here to be re written probs get any job i went for after you lot have ammended it lol

[LooLoo]

Re: help needed with advert

Shame I was gonna respond to your add............

slim fit female ;LOL ;LOL long blonde hair, 30 something (bit more of the something) looking for some lurve to hug, debt and alcohol no problem we would be a match made in heaven..........


(Oops best not tell Mr Loo)

[Wishfull]

Re: help needed with advert

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(Oops best not tell Mr Loo)[/quote]

was getting excited till i read the last bit

[LooLoo]

Re: help needed with advert

;LOL ;LOL ;LOL ;LOL ;LOL

[Never-In-Doubt]

Re: help needed with advert

yes put this on to get a laugh but when i need a new job im gonna put my cv on here to be re written probs get any job i went for after you lot have ammended it lol

haha - that's logical, you know what we may just have to create a CV section - lol. As you say, there are some great clever people here that would spot flaws a mile away - I may use my own free service when I sack myself ;LOL ;LOL