I would tweak it slightly to sound more like a demand for the return of the deposit. This woman needs a forthright approach or she doesn't 'get it'. No need to be overly polite on this occasion

Tell her that the 10 day statutory time limit for return of the deposit has expired and you request the full sum to be paid into bank account no 123456789 sort code 10-11-12 with immediate effect.
Tell her if she has any reason to withhold part of the deposit she must put her reasons in writing including any receipts to justify these deductions within seven days and pay the balance into your account now.
Warn her that if the matter is not resolved by Monday 18th August you will raise a dispute with mydeposits without further reference to her as is your legal right.
I'd also call mydeposits and tell them what you've done. They will log it on their system. That way she'll flag up as an awkward customer from the start. Get your word in first.
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